Sunday, September 10, 2006

Not mine.....But it has come out well

EXT. ROAD - NIGHT

Divya and Rajani (two pretty women in late twenties) keep walking briskly. They look kinda scared, as they walk really quickly.

DIVYA
Is he still following us ?

Rajani quickly turns back to see to hear quick footsteps.

RAJANI
Yes. he is following us.

DIVYA
Our luck is really rotten. The apartment is atleast 15 minutes and there is no bloody soul on this road.

RAJANI
We can find someone near the Whiskey bar. Will we face the guy and deal with him. We are two against one.

DIVYA
No. He was asking weird questions all the way during our journey in the train.

RAJANI
Did you look at his eyes. They looked really creepy and like blackholes.

DIVYA
Oh gud lord! Help us.

RAJANI
Now shut up and keep walking fast.

DIVYA
Actually when he was talking to me , he kept spraying spit everywhere and it was flowing his cheeks. That really freaked me out.

RAJANI
Now shut up and dont scare the hell out of me....

DIVYA
Gimme your mobile. I will call Ajit.

Rajani opens her handbag. No mobile! Divya looks at the bag in dismay.

DIVYA
Madam....You continue to be forgetful all your life. I am going to change my roommate NEXT MONTH.

RAJANI
Shut up. I might have forgotten my mobile a couple of times. You just need a small reason to explode against me.

DIVYA
Look, if we keep quarelling like bitches, the fool will catch up with us.

As they continue to walk, they see the lights of the bar.

DIVYA
Thank gawd!! The bar is still open. We may find some kinda help there.

A BLACK SANTRO is parked in front of the bar.

RAJANI
Hey! Thats your friend Sujith's car. Right ?

DIVYA reads out the registration number aloud.

DIVYA
M1064 - Thats him.

RAJANI
That guy...You had once considered going out with him right ?

DIVYA
Yes. He'd been rather persistent and I'd been put off....But he still had a bit of a crush on me and he mails once awhile and goes totally senti. I feel confident he would help.

RAJANI
Great! Some help for us.

DIVYA
I am gonna act like a damsel in distress and probably have to tolerate frequent phonecalls for a month or two. Thats okay.

EXT. BAR - NIGHT

Sujith (late twenties) is totally drunk with two of his pals as he heads for his car.

SUJITH
Bye guys! May the force be with you.

RAJANI and DIVYA stand near his car. Sujith is surprised. Suddenly the slur escapes him and he is fully alert.

SUJITH
Divya ? What are you doing here ?

DIVYA
Sujith, How are you ? Can you do me a favour. There's somebody tailing me. Can you sort him out?

SUJITH
Where is he ? What does he look like ?

Suddenly a big shriek is heard. A real howl like a werewolf.The footsteps sound hard and frequent.

DIVYA
Thats him. He has been following us throughout.

SUJITH
We will try.

DIVYA
Thanks a lot. Sujith, our place is just a few roads away from here. We have had a real nasty time. We will catchya later. Bye and thanks.

SUJITH
Bye.

SUJITH gears himself up and talks to his pals as Divya and Rajani almost start running.

As Divya tries to cross the next road, she is hit by a car.

BLACK OUT.

We FADE IN :

to a

INT. HOSPITAL DAY.

The nurse sits besides the bed as Divya opens her eyes.

DIVYA
What happened?

NURSE
You're very lucky. You've got a few broken ribs and a bit of concussion but other than that you're alright.

DIVYA
Where is Rajani ? And what happened to Sujith ? What happened to the man who was following us ?

NURSE
Rajani is in the police station. It seems an attack took place outside a whiskey bar on the same evening as your accident. A group of drunken men set upon a passer-by who had a weak heart. During the onslaught the man with the weak heart died. The man who is dead had your friend's mobile phone.

DIVYA becomes unconscious again.

2 comments:

direkishore said...

nice one :)

Anonymous said...

That's a good one..